If you have been to Kerala during a monsoon season then you will definitely know what the beauty of Rain is….Keep aside the thunder and lightning part, coz they are a bit scary.(It scares me, not sure about you) When those first droplets fall on that dry sand there spreads a fragrance, the fragrance of fresh sand…That drives me mad..
On such a rainy day while watching this down pour from my window, there blossomed a poem out of nowhere….Here it goes….
Again came the rainy season
Chit chat chit chat rainy season
Pushing back the summer season
Hot hot hot hot summer season
Muddy pools everywhere
With no place to keep a foot
Shelly snails here and there
Paper boats sailing everywhere
With no near and dear
Cries of the 5 year old everywhere
For schools are open in this year
With the rocking thunder
And the lightning clouds
Have a shower in the rainAnd enjoy the fragrance of rain
Awesome. If this was your first poem ever, then it is extraordinary i would say - including the presentation, interspersed with apt pics! Lovely...The feeling is conveyed very well to the reader straight from poet's heart.
ReplyDeletehi Guna.....
ReplyDeletethanks for this appreciation...:)
I must say this is a classic piece for a beginner ... the narrative style and the tone rightly captures the innocence and purity of "rain" .. i'm sure everyone of us have had some of the sweetest childhood memories in rain ... ur poem just brought back some of those .. thanks for that ... :)
ReplyDeleteKeep going ... you have a great future as a writer ...
Hai Mr.Sunshine....
DeleteThanks for the comment and support extended to me...
really its awesome and they way ,the style u presented is pretty impressive !!!!!!!!! like it !lol
ReplyDeletehai Briju
Deletethanks for liking my poem....